I trust the advice of my vitiligo friends, because they havn't really given me any bad advice so far :) so... what do you guys think? Should i send it to her?

If i were a painter



If i were a painter

I would paint a beautiful spring day

with sun and trees and birds who sing

I would paint a clear blue sky

over head huge bodies of water

And i would paint planes and boats

so that we can reach any area of the canvas together

But i would leave a huge empty space on that canvas

I would save that space for when i have the courage

to tell you how much you mean to me

I would save that space on the canvas for a dream i had

Of me having enough courage to tell you

That of all the amazing things i would like to have in my life

I want you the most.

So if i were actually a painter

I'd paint my perfect day

So i could look you in the eye and say:

You always make me smile, even in my darkest hour

You drain me of all negative energy when you're around

You lift my spirits and make me want to do crazy things

these are feelings i haven't fealt in years….

How simple this would be if i were a painter

So i could paint a picture

Of how i feel about you

so it could get through

I would paint a picture of me and you

And when my painting would be complete

i would plastify it

To protect you

….And i would never ever hurt you.

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  • Great !!!!! :-)

  • As you can see, it has went through some changes lol.

    If i were a painter
    I would paint a beautiful spring day
    with sun and trees and birds who sing
    I would paint a clear blue sky
    over-head huge bodies of water
    And i would paint planes and boats
    so that we can reach any area of the canvas together
    But i would leave a large empty space on that canvas
    I would save that space for when i have the courage
    to tell you how much you mean to me
    I would save that space on the canvas for the dream i had
    of you and me by the bright blue coast.
    I can add up all the amazing things i want in my life
    and i would still want you most.
    So if i were a painter
    I'd paint my perfect day
    So i could look you in the eyes and say:
    You always make me smile, even in my darkest hour
    You drain me of all my negative energy when you're around
    You lift my spirits and make me want to do crazy things
    feelings i haven't felt in years….
    Sometimes i wish i were a painter
    So i could paint a picture of you
    but even then, it would never match your beauty
    It could never match what my eyes see
    How simple it would be if i were a painter, with colours and a brush
    I would paint a perfect picture to express at least that much
    • Better! I like it.
      • LOL ok so she came by and all the signs and signals were there so i folded up the poem in a heart shape and dropped it in her purse when she wasn't looking. fingers crossed!! =)
  • Awwwwh,
  • It's really touching. I'd cut it off at line 22 and just end with how simple this would be if I were a painter. Better to lead with a lighter touch. That way you don't come off as smothering. Just my opinion. :)
    • thanks :) i definitely don't wanna come across as smothering. I'll update you and let you know how it goes.
  • Cute.
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